Blue Fairy

hi this is really good. you can really feel the emotions of Michael. the torando is described strongly too. :D the only thing I think you could have improved is ...

thanks midnight the sentence about them moving To london: i haven't made it very clear but I meant there mum moved to London so they would have lived there for ...

hope you like it: Tally sat on her windowsill pondering over the amount of time it would take for her three sugar filled cousins and twin brother to thunder into ...

I have nothing against emos. But it just makes me disgusted when they complain about people teasing them for being emo, and then calling themselves emo! i agree it so ...

hehehe this is really good and its true. I bet almost everyone feels like that sometimes. I'm always being kicked off the computer just when i'm about to write oh ...

I: Imagination (Imagination rocks!!!!!!)

it love it, it's really good. the only problem I have with it is some of the words are hard to understand (A bit formal) hope to read more soon ...

hi most people prefer to read things if they don't have to download them. it could contain a virus (not saying that you would send a virus) and that stops ...

thats not copy and paste thats downloading and most people would rather not download something in case something happens. its better just being able to open and read it. good ...

hi extraterrestial welcome I would review your first story but where is it? hope you get it posted soon Fairy :)

Hi Right well most of the typing errors have been pinpointed but I have noticed a couple of sentences that could be improved. the first one: I don't think they ...

Thanks fishr I think what you have said will really improve my story. some of the things in wrote don't sound right i agree. I think i will definietly add ...

I have not had a chance to read the other three chapters of this so forgive if I don't understand some things: Alita and Jansen stepped [url]on ward[/url] Do you ...

this idea has just popped into my head. I don’t no if I should write more. London, 1940 Air raid sirens rung harshly in Emily's ears. The sirens had started ...

hi ata this is so amazingly written i couldn't find much to say about it. At the forest’s edge i didn't understand this though i don't have a suggestion to ...